the leaves

spiral to the ground,

“our last breaths,”

as if a joke to poke fun

at the haiku.

4 responses to “NO PUN INTENDED

  1. Don, this writing here is something a little bit different from you and i like it …. lots of elements and deepness all in one breath, very cool indeed …. still got some catchin’ up to do on alot of your other postings but wanted to give you a quick shout out on this gem ….:)

    • jimi…glad that you liked it. it’s a very old piece. i don’t play with the haiku element much. i wanted to see what kind of reaction i’d get to it. as to the others not a problem. thanks for the cool comment…:)

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