i was sitting here –

all was quiet.

but then i heard

this loud rapping.

it sounded pretty urgent,

so i hurried over

and looked through the peephole.

i couldn’t believe what I saw.

naked and vulnerable

at this very moment,

like it needed company.

i kept an open mind

And let it come in.

passions erupted in all the dialogue.

all this heat is what happens

when words drop by.

5 responses to “SURPRISE VISIT

    • alex…i never thought about poe when i put it together, but can see that now. i have a few pieces where it looks like i’m leading the reader into something else and then i drop the surprise at the end. when i can i love to do that. thanks for coming around and leaving a comment.

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