(technically not a haiku but trying too)
Beauty pours forth
Out of strength
When challenged
Out of conception.
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(technically not a haiku but trying too)
Beauty pours forth
Out of strength
When challenged
Out of conception.
poetics~cool out of the rafters 
like this
glad that you liked dean. appreciate you coming my way.
Elegant! Ignore the set patterns, be an inventor 😉 This stanza-like thingy came from somewhere deep down 🙂
-Naima.
naima….thank you:) definitely an inventor on this one as it was so small. it’s an old one too. it came from waaaaaaaaaaaay down inside:)))
Yeah, I know, somewhere deep down 😉
-Naima.
Haiku …shmy-ku! This says something. Saying what you want comes first…if you can fit it with haiku great…but, poetry is poetry. Art before tecnique:)
i knew it was to small for a haiku, so i had to come up with a title to reflect that. thanks for the comment and stopping by:)
Perhaps, “Haiku, an abstract”? 😉
Very nice read- thank you.
thanks anne for your wonderful comment. i suppose it could be an abstract. i think though usually it’s like obscure. can’t say for sure. here it is created from the reverse angle. i wrote it about 8 years go. i’m finding that some of my older stuff has value and that is good to see. i’m not sure if i said that my blog was a mix breed of old and new. if i didn’t you know now…hehe.